What a fantastic narrative of Peter and Diego and their adventure Kelsey! I love the use of dialogue to tell what is happening in your story, it creates a lot of excitement as if you are right there with them. Next time, just to structure your writing in to paragraphs as we spoke about. Keep up the great writing! - Mrs T
What a fantastic narrative of Peter and Diego and their adventure Kelsey! I love the use of dialogue to tell what is happening in your story, it creates a lot of excitement as if you are right there with them. Next time, just to structure your writing in to paragraphs as we spoke about. Keep up the great writing! - Mrs T
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