Excellent work Kelsey - you have a very good understanding of the use of speech marks to indicate dialogue in your writing, well done. I also love the way you have varied the type of sentences you have used in your short narrative. This is very effective and adds to the mood of the story. Ka pai tō mahi! - Mrs T
Excellent work Kelsey - you have a very good understanding of the use of speech marks to indicate dialogue in your writing, well done. I also love the way you have varied the type of sentences you have used in your short narrative. This is very effective and adds to the mood of the story. Ka pai tō mahi! - Mrs T
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