Hey Kelsey! I find your bio-poem really interesting. I am also really skittish around cockroaches! Possibly next time you could add a few full stops at the end of your sentences (some are missing). Other than that I really enjoyed reading your bio-poem and I would love to learn more about you. :) From Garnet.
Kia Ora Garnet! Thank you for all the feed back! I'm glad I'm not the only one who is terrified of cockroaches! In the future I'll make sure I won't forget to add the full stops! Kelsey.
Hey Kelsey! I find your bio-poem really interesting. I am also really skittish around cockroaches! Possibly next time you could add a few full stops at the end of your sentences (some are missing). Other than that I really enjoyed reading your bio-poem and I would love to learn more about you. :)
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Kia Ora Garnet! Thank you for all the feed back! I'm glad I'm not the only one who is terrified of cockroaches! In the future I'll make sure I won't forget to add the full stops!
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